This book has a really cool idea. Unfortunately, the writing is not up to par with that idea. There are numerous typos, which doesn't hold too much weight for me considering this was a free ebook, however the writing was really very poor. There was pretty much no character development. It was very plot-centered and a few places seemed rushed, like Hahn wasn't sure what to do with the scene but needed it to carry on the plot. I hated all of the characters, because they were stock characters and caricatures of people (the hot jock, the unpopular girl, the perfect girl, ect.). Really the only thing this book had going for it was that Hahn came up with an original and unique idea. While I hated the writing and the slightly Twilight-esque moments, I still would like to read the rest of the series, because I love the backstory so much.